tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954473905210246986.post3397628737393509255..comments2023-09-23T06:13:38.439-07:00Comments on I Take the Pen: Prompt Tuesday #10Kristahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10348921731053503531noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954473905210246986.post-3341372697109340942011-08-31T07:16:59.729-07:002011-08-31T07:16:59.729-07:00@Cassandra Thanks! I am so flattered!@<a href="#c6358953612186936922" rel="nofollow">Cassandra</a> Thanks! I am so flattered!Kristahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10348921731053503531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954473905210246986.post-81414815505005358702011-08-31T07:13:00.533-07:002011-08-31T07:13:00.533-07:00@Sarah Pearson Sounds like she is better off witho...@<a href="#c8098056859425382125" rel="nofollow">Sarah Pearson</a> Sounds like she is better off without him. Great scene!Kristahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10348921731053503531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954473905210246986.post-63589536121869369222011-08-30T20:26:52.912-07:002011-08-30T20:26:52.912-07:00This scene is a joy to read! I can just imagine th...This scene is a joy to read! I can just imagine the princess and the jester. <br /><br />Also, I've given you some awards at my blog!Cassandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11846462829080352926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954473905210246986.post-80980568594253821252011-08-30T13:38:18.419-07:002011-08-30T13:38:18.419-07:00Her laugh broke the silence. I stared at her, conf...Her laugh broke the silence. I stared at her, confused.<br /> "Did you hear what I just said?" I asked.<br /> "Of course I did. You told a stupid joke."<br /> "It's not a joke. Tom and Melissa eloped last night. I'm so sorry."<br /> "Don't be silly, the wedding's in a month. He's at home. It was a stupid joke." She repeated.<br /><br />She gazed at the ring on her finger and I saw a single tear land on the diamond. This time she didn't laugh.Sarah Tokeleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13273148070092101085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954473905210246986.post-29639251821154312272011-08-30T09:42:20.789-07:002011-08-30T09:42:20.789-07:00I love that you incorporated this into your WIP! ...I love that you incorporated this into your WIP! Once I get to writing TOI I will have to try that.<br /><br />Also love the scene by the way.Kristahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10348921731053503531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7954473905210246986.post-15227234697226460652011-08-30T07:17:55.795-07:002011-08-30T07:17:55.795-07:00Very nice! This prompt actually does with the nex...Very nice! This prompt actually does with the next scene that I was going to write for "Nameless".<br /><br /><br />Her laughter broke the silence. Edom looked up from his serious conversation with Trent as Liora laughed again. The little baby on her lap smiled and gently touched her face. Ever so slightly, his lips curled into a smile and for a second, he forgot his troubles and the pain. He only saw the joy in his little sister. Edom mourned for a moment, dreaming of the happiness that he had lost. He hadn't laughed in so long. The memories faded as he stared into the red flames burning as the children began to dance. It was too late for him.Krista McLaughlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09230770035490273428noreply@blogger.com