Tuesday, July 2, 2013

Query Hook for Trusted, a Poll

Okay, so I am playing around with writing a query for my current work in progress: Dragons' Trust Book One: Trusted. I figure I can either use it to find an agent or adapt it to a book blurb based on my final traditional/indie decision. And... I need your help. Below are some options for my opening paragraph - or hook. Which do you like best?



Do you find writing queries to be a daunting task?

1 comment:

  1. Queries are very daunting. It's hard to judge without seeing the full query, but I can tell you for sure that you don't want to start with a question. Agents really get annoyed by that.

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