There are two reasons I like Tuesdays. First, Monday is over and I don’t have to live through it again for a whole week. Second, Prompt Tuesday (Yeah!).
I post a prompt and a response, and I encourage you to post – or at least write – a response too. It is fun and is a good warm up to writing. And don’t for get to check out the other prompts, click the Prompt Tuesdays link under Tags.
Prompt
Create your own metaphors (Source: fictionwriting.about.com)- Blue paint spilled on the road like ____________________.
 - Canceled checks in the abandoned subway car seemed ____________________.
 - A spider under the rug is like ___________________.
 - Graffiti on the abandoned building like ___________________.
 - Nothing was the same, now that it was ___________________.
 - The dice rolled out of the cup toward Veronica like ___________________.
 - A child in ___________________ is like a ___________________ in ___________________.
 - ___________________ is like muscles stretched taut over bone.
 - The fog plumed through gunshot holes in the car windows like ___________________.
 - She held her life in her own hands as if it were ___________________.
 - Lacey poured coffee down her throat as if ___________________.
 - If I should wake before I die, ___________________.
 - The security guard walks the lobby as if ___________________.
 - The library books left in the rain like ___________________.
 - Music in the hallway like ___________________.
 
Response
- Blue paint spilled on the road like water splashing from the bath.
 - Canceled checks in the abandoned subway car seemed worn and torn like old treasure maps..
 - A spider under the rug is like jam between your toes.
 - Graffiti on the abandoned building like scars on a battle worn warrior.
 - Nothing was the same, now that it was all stirred together like cookie dough batter.
 - The dice rolled out of the cup toward Veronica like boulders crashing down a hill.
 - A child in the morning is like a baby bird in the throws of a hungry wail.
 - My nerves 
isare like muscles stretched taut over bone. - The fog plumed through gunshot holes in the car windows like smoke from a cigar.
 - She held her life in her own hands as if it were a simple river stone.
 - Lacey poured coffee down her throat as if it were rain after a long drought.
 - If I should wake before I die, I will feel all the more dispair.
 - The security guard walks the lobby as if he is a tiger stalking its prey.
 - The library books left in the rain like stray cats on a garbage can.
 - Music in the hallway like construction work in the city.
 
Nice activity! I like the image of a child like a baby bird. Metaphors like this work best when combined with concrete nouns and verbs like the ones you have here. Thanks for sharing!
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Thanks Miss GOP.
ReplyDeleteI have a sister that is 16 years younger than me. I vividly remember what the *early* mornings were like when she was a baby :)
Thanks for posting this exercrise Krista. I've filled it out and added a few to my notebook for later use. Huzzah!
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it! I thought it was a great prompt. Would like to find more like it.
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